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Posted Monday, February 02, 2009 10:10 PM

Into the Dark....

 I'd like to get some input on this poem I wrote before I present it to the woman in my life that I came so close to losing. I'd like to get it right the 1st time. I'm new to writing so any thoughts would be greatly appreciated.........                                                                       Into the Dark   "Remember the good times" she whispered, as she faded away.... Knowing in her heart, they would meet again one day....   "Don't do this love" I cried into the phone.... Panic set in as I heard the dial tone....   Speeding down the interstate in the pouring rain.... Nothing can dull this oncoming pain....   My heart dropped as I came through the door.... Seeing her motionless on the living room floor....   This can't be real, I arrived too late.... She possessed the courage to seal her own fate....   I fell to my knees, next to her body grown cold.... Why would my love do something so bold?   Another precious life has been lost to love.... How could this happen? I ask the good lord above....   I picked up... [More]


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